Hey I have a question, Is it because of my bad internet or something else that i can't download the game? It stops mid-download, and it happened already 6 times 🥲
Good game, the english could use a bit of work, but other than that, the game is amazing! i really do hope the nsfw scenes will be animated, and not frozen images.
I loved this game and the only thing I didn't like is that it lasted so little, I hope that the next updates will add more content to the game and can release it in the not too distant future <3 (I literally created an account on this page to write this lol)
When I get more money I will donate, I love this game, and if you need more help just ask because I do anything to help this proget, but I´m kinda poor right now...
Sorry for stupidity, but how do you progress in the game. i can't do anything, like progress time, I click on the icon and nothing happens and have exhausted all talking options.
I actually enjoyed this quite a bit and look forward to more the art style is unique which adds a lot since the storyline is basic but it's also a classic I am also just glad the sister isn't the bitchy whiney version of the sister stereotype (basic doesn't mean bad it just means more common) also in my opinion the art style adds to the expressions with the chibi vibe and I thought the sexual scenes would be jarring between the cutesy and the actual scenes but nope it's not at all so far id recommend this game just hope it doesn't become a grind fest slog like most adult visual novels
this game has good art and style but i cant enjoy it cause at the part ara ara.. how careless i am, the screen freezes for me so can you please fix it creator？ thankss alott （edit, im on android, just incase for more information or anything）
For some reason on android it keeps crashing, not sure why also the auto save is full of new games. a fix to theese things would be great because its literally unplayable for me lol
Is there an error message? if there is, could you send it to my email luzikike@gmail.com or dm me on discord or some social media so I can find a solution, please? 🙏
How many characters are you all making? Will the characters all female? Also if the game further updates will the MC tell the females who are part of his loving hand supporting harem aware that they are in a harem?
I plan to make approximately 15 characters. 3 to 4 will be men.
About the characters awareness of the MC be in a harem... Wooow!... in fact... I haven't really thought about that 😁😁😁 I think the characters won't have that in mind at first, at least during the early parts of the development.
My idea is to make sure they don't commit and everything just happens, like ecchi anime! And then... when the game have all the characters... all the scenes... the gameplay full working... maybe I'll put a jealousy system and some cool mechanics. Not sure about that yet 😁
👍😎👍 Yes! It's on the plans!! I thought about a beach day "dating", where you can hang out with one or more girl. Just like those anime beach day episodes!!! 😁
For multiple invited girls, it would increase affection points for more than one girl at the same time, but with divided points.
For a hang out with only one girl, the affection points will increase more, since it is focused on her.
🥺🙏 I hope I can do it soon! I have a lot of scene ideas for this beach day.
is it possible you create trigger scenes, like you did something in the game it trigger a scene or plot route, like if you choose the single relationship route, all the girls who have a crush on the MC (you) (also will you make a relationship meter like it started as friends into close friends, into crush, and finally lovers, that where the intercourse will be use) will do in there power to seperate you and your choosen girls, their are two endings, 1.) Understand and Accept there not compatible but still be close friends, 2, they fully love and married the girl. Or if you choose a route where you want to choose all three main girls of the game (MC Step Mom, MC Step Sister, MC best friend), there a trigger scene/pot route, the MC struggle to keep a secrets that he all slept with them, until he confess and all the girls might be upset but realise he really feel sorry so they give him a chance in this harem relationship, if he promise he love all of them equaly, it's simply an idea, what do you think?
😮Wooow! 🤗 Thank you so much for the suggestion!! 💛
That's not exactly my idea for a gameplay mechanic, but it could be good for specific characters with specific personalities! I must think about a gameplay like that at a very late development stage so that the gameplay progresses better in these early stages. For now, everything that looks like a relationship betrayal won't be implemented, and the girls may only be concerned with how the MC sees themselves (at least, as a gameplay mechanic).
😊 Yes! I intend to do! I'm just trying to find the best way to do that... 😅 Cos maybe I'll need to learn how to use Live2D so I could make it animated and interactive
I hope i can see it as masterpiece in the near future, i love the artstyle too it looks cute. Can't wait for new updates.
Also, i think i need to mention this when i try to play the game(on android) it'll randomly crash sometimes, i can still play it but it's a bit of an inconvenience. Hopefully you can fix it in the future. Keep up the great work 💛
Does it crash with an error message? does it crash in a specific time? 😁🙏 If you don't mind, could you send me an email or message telling me what and how exactly it happens so I can find a way to fix or optimize it, please?
Just send to luzikike@gmail.com or by a DM in Discord or any social media 😊
~Edit: Heavy dialogue problem solved for the next update (v0.5) 💛
Really cool! I really enjoyed this update! It was a bit short but the park scene was really cute! Reading the comments I saw that you will place the text dialogue file in the game folders and I wonder if I could help you translate the game into Italian. I would like to do more but it's the best I can do XD
I have to think a little about the translation, 🤭 cos I still need to learn how to create a system for that... and maybe I need to focus on the story progress (it's still too short, right?) 😁😁😁 But it'd already help when it was be implemented! 💛
Heyyy, sorry for the big delay. I don't check Itch very often as you can see. Of course, I'm still interested. I'll message you on Discord for the files.
🥰🙏 Thank you so much! I really appreciate your offer 💛
I should prepare a text file from now on and put it in the main game folder in the next updates, so people can patch it and send me, okay? (and maybe, put translations in the future)
Well there maynot be a lot of content yet as it seems only a little was added with this update, but nonetheless heres a sandwich. As always it is 1 good, 1 bad, 1 good.
Let's start with the art style which is the biggest thing with all visual novels! It's so very bold to make an adult visual novel with chibi style characters. But yet I find that it's oddly alluring to an extent. Didn't have high hopes when I first saw it but it honestly works!
Now for something bad. My friend you need to proof read your dialogue. A lot of people who would play your game can leave bad reviews for that alone. I've seen it in quite a few different games.
And now to finish up the sandwich. Let's look at the music. It's pretty chill! Leaves a bit to be desired but I think it really works with the art style you've set off with.
All in all, though.. With what I've seen I'm not sure how long this novel can be without running out of content. Sure you can milk it out but people would get bored pretty quick. So my overall rating? 6 outta 10.
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i really love the game before i bought it i was checking the free version of the game and i love it so now i own the Early Access for PC
🥺👉👈 Thank you so much for your words and support! 💛
Very nice game,12/10,do u also need any translation for other languages,bc I can really help a lot
🙏 Thank you so much for your offer! 💛
I think I won't put translations for now, cos it may be very laborious to implement and it would decrease the game progress even more... ;n;
Ok,no worries,Im excited for 0.5.0 as well!
🙋♂️ Heeey, I learned how to implement translation and I'll try to put it on next update xD
If you're still interested in help, can you send me a message on my Discord, or Twitter, or email so I can send you the text files? :)
Yooo man, I'm sure gonna help out, I've alr emailed u so feel free to send me the text in Email, but I apologize for not having a discord :(
Hi, I wanted to know if there will be subtitles in Portuguese
Hi, I think I must put it in a later later future... maybe just when the game have a stable version, like a 1.0 or something like that 😁
I still didn't find a way to ease the translation process, so, for now it would decrease the development rate a lot ;u;
Hey I have a question, Is it because of my bad internet or something else that i can't download the game? It stops mid-download, and it happened already 6 times 🥲
I checked here, and the download worked. Maybe it's something about your internet
Thanks, maybe it is my internet, thanks for your time
Very expensive if converting to real (BRL). Had some kind of monetary correction it would help a lot 🫠
Don't worry, I intend to aways put a free version too ^^
Damn, hopefully 0.5.0 is released soon, this games cool
Thank you! I'm glad you liked :3
Will there ever be any casual nudety?
😁 There's already one at the end of the intro. But yes! The idea is to put a lot more
Good game, the english could use a bit of work, but other than that, the game is amazing! i really do hope the nsfw scenes will be animated, and not frozen images.
Thank you!
I intend to make it animated! ^^
This game is so unique and i love it 😍👌 keep it up im looking forward in the next update (◍•ᴗ•◍)
( ~ *w*)~ Thank you! 💛
Quick question: pregnancy?
No :p
Based reply, thank you
I loved this game and the only thing I didn't like is that it lasted so little, I hope that the next updates will add more content to the game and can release it in the not too distant future <3 (I literally created an account on this page to write this lol)
😍 Thank you! 💛 and WelCUM to the Itch.io!!! 😁😁😁
;u; I hope I can speed up the game progress soon
When I get more money I will donate, I love this game, and if you need more help just ask because I do anything to help this proget, but I´m kinda poor right now...
🤗 Don't worry! Thank you so much 💛
It's a good piece of work, but I still need to wait and see for a while. I wish the author's content can let more people like it!
🥰 Thank you so much!
The art style is hella cute i love it
😍 Thank you!
Sorry for stupidity, but how do you progress in the game. i can't do anything, like progress time, I click on the icon and nothing happens and have exhausted all talking options.
The game still doesnt have any nsfw scena bc its still in development so you prob Got to the end already
Hi!
Would you be playing an earlier version? I put an note on v0.3 and v0.4 when the game reaches the end.
If it's not the case, maybe it's a bug. In what part of the gameplay you are stuck at?
I actually enjoyed this quite a bit and look forward to more the art style is unique which adds a lot since the storyline is basic but it's also a classic I am also just glad the sister isn't the bitchy whiney version of the sister stereotype (basic doesn't mean bad it just means more common) also in my opinion the art style adds to the expressions with the chibi vibe and I thought the sexual scenes would be jarring between the cutesy and the actual scenes but nope it's not at all so far id recommend this game just hope it doesn't become a grind fest slog like most adult visual novels
🤗 Thank you so much for the feedback!
For now the plot must remain linear, but I intend to make the level up progress not so repetitive so that the grinding part can be pleasant.
MOREEEE DUDE!
I LOVE THIS GODDMITT GAME
AND I also WeLCUM more update:P
Thank you!! 💛
✨😌🍷✨ More
cummingcoming, sir.Dude keep going i enjoyed that
✊😌 I will! Thank you!💛
I love this game and I hope for updates
Thank you! ✨\o/✨ More are
cummingcoming*!this game has good art and style but i cant enjoy it cause at the part ara ara.. how careless i am, the screen freezes for me so can you please fix it creator？ thankss alott （edit, im on android, just incase for more information or anything）
🙏 Sorry, the dialogue effects are too heavy on android, right? I'll find a way to optimize (or maybe hide or remove)
~Edit: Solved for the next update (v0.5) 💛
this game fkn rocks, keep it up
😍 Thank you! 💛 \o/
Gold in the making
:3 Thank you! 💛
A masterpiece in the making. Can't wait to play the next update-!
🥺👉👈 Thank you!! 💛
Cuando saldrá el juego para el público
At the end of this month! 😁
Does anyone know the secret code?
PLSSSSS!
I did the cheat code for Patreon supporters and a free one available in the info button of my other game, Kawaii Character Creator.
I reallly like where this game is going and i excited for future updates
💕🤗💕Thank you!
For some reason on android it keeps crashing, not sure why also the auto save is full of new games. a fix to theese things would be great because its literally unplayable for me lol
Is there an error message? if there is, could you send it to my email luzikike@gmail.com or dm me on discord or some social media so I can find a solution, please? 🙏
just closed for no reason after I read about 5 lines, I think I'll start a new game that might work
*EDIT*
I didn't.
):
Just stops when the girl across the window says is that you?!
🙏Thank you for the report! Now I have a better idea of what to fix.
I should optimize the dialogues, cos the part you mentioned has a lot of text animation, and it's probably making the game heavy :p
Thanks, really great game by the way
Solved for the next update (v0.5) 💛
I did the cheat code for Patreon supporters xD
✨👀✨ But there's a free code in the info button of my other game, Kawaii Character Creator.
It was great update AWESOME
Thank you!!! ✨🥺👉👈✨ I'm glad you enjoyed!
How many characters are you all making? Will the characters all female? Also if the game further updates will the MC tell the females who are part of his loving hand supporting harem aware that they are in a harem?
I plan to make approximately 15 characters. 3 to 4 will be men.
About the characters awareness of the MC be in a harem... Wooow!... in fact... I haven't really thought about that 😁😁😁 I think the characters won't have that in mind at first, at least during the early parts of the development.
My idea is to make sure they don't commit and everything just happens, like ecchi anime! And then... when the game have all the characters... all the scenes... the gameplay full working... maybe I'll put a jealousy system and some cool mechanics. Not sure about that yet 😁
How about a dating system where you chose one or two lovers in the harem to make it interesting. What do you think?
👍😎👍 Yes! It's on the plans!! I thought about a beach day "dating", where you can hang out with one or more girl. Just like those anime beach day episodes!!! 😁
For multiple invited girls, it would increase affection points for more than one girl at the same time, but with divided points.
For a hang out with only one girl, the affection points will increase more, since it is focused on her.
🥺🙏 I hope I can do it soon! I have a lot of scene ideas for this beach day.
is it possible you create trigger scenes, like you did something in the game it trigger a scene or plot route, like if you choose the single relationship route, all the girls who have a crush on the MC (you) (also will you make a relationship meter like it started as friends into close friends, into crush, and finally lovers, that where the intercourse will be use) will do in there power to seperate you and your choosen girls, their are two endings, 1.) Understand and Accept there not compatible but still be close friends, 2, they fully love and married the girl. Or if you choose a route where you want to choose all three main girls of the game (MC Step Mom, MC Step Sister, MC best friend), there a trigger scene/pot route, the MC struggle to keep a secrets that he all slept with them, until he confess and all the girls might be upset but realise he really feel sorry so they give him a chance in this harem relationship, if he promise he love all of them equaly, it's simply an idea, what do you think?
😮Wooow! 🤗 Thank you so much for the suggestion!! 💛
That's not exactly my idea for a gameplay mechanic, but it could be good for specific characters with specific personalities! I must think about a gameplay like that at a very late development stage so that the gameplay progresses better in these early stages. For now, everything that looks like a relationship betrayal won't be implemented, and the girls may only be concerned with how the MC sees themselves (at least, as a gameplay mechanic).
you say 3 to 4 will be men. will any be futa?
1 of them should be a "dateable", but I'm not sure yet. Maybe it will. At least, the idea is to make him very feminine in personality.
So, you're planning on possibly adding a femboy? if that's the case, count me all the way in!
and about the game being o rpg maker i was think and I noticed that we would have more mobility and able to re do the scenes
I'll do it in Renpy cos it's better optimized for the platforms. The mobility will work by screen buttons.
I intend to do a top-down RPG game in the future (maybe next year... idk xD)
the game will have animations?
😊 Yes! I intend to do! I'm just trying to find the best way to do that... 😅 Cos maybe I'll need to learn how to use Live2D so I could make it animated and interactive
How do I update the app using website?
im pretty sure the only way is to just download the new version, it should save your progress
what about the paid one?
no clue about paid games, never paid for an itch game before
@NJred2000 @the rot consumes
Yes, there's just one version for now (0.3.2). The following one is not finished yet ^^ I should be doing a post when it launches
I LOVE THIS GAME SO MUCH!!1!!1
I hope i can see it as masterpiece in the near future, i love the artstyle too it looks cute. Can't wait for new updates.
Also, i think i need to mention this when i try to play the game(on android) it'll randomly crash sometimes, i can still play it but it's a bit of an inconvenience. Hopefully you can fix it in the future. Keep up the great work 💛
🥰 Thank you so much! 💛
Does it crash with an error message? does it crash in a specific time? 😁🙏 If you don't mind, could you send me an email or message telling me what and how exactly it happens so I can find a way to fix or optimize it, please?
Just send to luzikike@gmail.com or by a DM in Discord or any social media 😊
~Edit: Heavy dialogue problem solved for the next update (v0.5) 💛
Acabo de jugar la nueva actualización y me encanto, esperaré con ansias la siguiente actualización 💛
🤗 Thank you! 💛💛💛
loved the new update even though the update was a bit short it was great and I believe that this game will become a masterpiece!!!!
😍🙏 Thank you so much! 💛💛💛
Really cool! I really enjoyed this update! It was a bit short but the park scene was really cute! Reading the comments I saw that you will place the text dialogue file in the game folders and I wonder if I could help you translate the game into Italian. I would like to do more but it's the best I can do XD
😍🙏 Thank you so much!!!
I have to think a little about the translation, 🤭 cos I still need to learn how to create a system for that... and maybe I need to focus on the story progress (it's still too short, right?) 😁😁😁 But it'd already help when it was be implemented! 💛
🙋♂️ Heeey, I learned how to implement translation and I'll try to put it on next update xD
If you're still interested in help, can you send me a message on my Discord, or Twitter, or email so I can send you the text files? :)
Heyyy, sorry for the big delay. I don't check Itch very often as you can see. Of course, I'm still interested. I'll message you on Discord for the files.
Any plans for a female protagonist?
🙁🙏 None, sorry.
The new update is a bit short. But it’s okay, I trust you.
And, uh… Is there a file with dialog in the game files?
I’ll patch it, don’t ask. xD
🥰🙏 Thank you so much! I really appreciate your offer 💛
I should prepare a text file from now on and put it in the main game folder in the next updates, so people can patch it and send me, okay? (and maybe, put translations in the future)
Well there maynot be a lot of content yet as it seems only a little was added with this update, but nonetheless heres a sandwich. As always it is 1 good, 1 bad, 1 good.
Let's start with the art style which is the biggest thing with all visual novels! It's so very bold to make an adult visual novel with chibi style characters. But yet I find that it's oddly alluring to an extent. Didn't have high hopes when I first saw it but it honestly works!
Now for something bad. My friend you need to proof read your dialogue. A lot of people who would play your game can leave bad reviews for that alone. I've seen it in quite a few different games.
And now to finish up the sandwich. Let's look at the music. It's pretty chill! Leaves a bit to be desired but I think it really works with the art style you've set off with.
All in all, though.. With what I've seen I'm not sure how long this novel can be without running out of content. Sure you can milk it out but people would get bored pretty quick. So my overall rating? 6 outta 10.
💕😋💕Thank you for the feedback sandwich!!!
✊😌 I still want to improve a lot, so that maybe one day it can be worthy of being a 10/10 game 😁
Do your best Q!